Abdul Wahab


Strange Feeling - Poem by Abdul Wahab

A strange feeling comes in a strange way in a strange package
In a strange color in a strange structure with a strange feature
With a strange nature with a strange behavior
Inside me which I can feel but can't express
As it stands at a distance far away making me helpless.

It breaks in,
Before holding to mold
It goes out

I put a tricky trap
To catch but it tactfully traps the trap
And very fast catches me up.

But it never becomes my very own
Or leaves me to live peacefully alone

It has been doing what it does and doesn't change.
It does always derange me, what a strange?


Comments about Strange Feeling by Abdul Wahab

  • Rookie - 31 Points Jinal Oswal (3/29/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    I like this strange poem.. it puts light on the strangest of the things which happens with everyone.. and at times its difficult to understand... Loved the first 5 lines! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,492 Points Pheko Motaung (3/25/2012 3:46:00 AM)

    You're in your masterly best performance here! The word play is intoxicating! Brilliant poem Abdul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/24/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    Yup sometimes we feel joyous other time are bound to nervous. We lament and act as demented fellows. Nevertheless, human-beings are made that way........ Truth glitters in the poem. Wahbji, well said....... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (3/24/2012 1:21:00 AM)

    wonder strange, the poet's dilemma in dealing with the difficult feelings...................
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    .......................................................................................................................................................thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, March 30, 2012


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