Strangers* Poem by C. P. Sharma

Strangers*

Rating: 5.0


What a strange relationship?
My body and the spirit lived together the whole life,
But couldn’t dialogue! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

* I owe the thought to the Urdu poet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 23 July 2009

atma, soul and universe..... wind never talk with rays, moon never talk with the sun and the body never hear atma............... great.........

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Ramesh T A 23 July 2009

It is an open secret so long!

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Raj Nandy 24 July 2009

I can hear echoes of Rumi? The 'body' and 'soul' are like strangers in the night exchanging glances, hesitating to communicate, speculating the chances! Till one gets dissolved and the other departs; Such thoughts only sadden my heart! - Raj Nandy

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Miriam Maia Padua 25 July 2009

A very meaningful one... We know that spirit and body works along together but it us who wouldn't work Same as 'The spirit is willing but the Flesh is weak' Great write, Sir...makes us reflect...and dig deeper into our inner self.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Sandra Fowler 27 July 2009

A poignant title. Meaningful lines. 10/10. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

well I don't talk to the bus that carries me although I sometimes coax my car along hee hee: -) but my body carries my spirit and we are great travel companions except when my body goes wrong or we run out of fuel ; -) Ruthy

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Ana Zaldivar 11 August 2009

Intresting expression.. makes me think a lot...

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Onelia Avelar 08 August 2009

:) You really make me think; formulated like this it seems really strange - like an anomaly - the lack of dialogue between body and spirit, we are so used to this, that we rarely think about it. You make me wanna talk to my organs :) but alas I find they do not listen to me. You make me feel like marionette :) . Good work!

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

The body holds the ego, the spirit is our own true self, while the ego battles with itself, our spirit is eternal and serene. Wonderful wisdom in just three lines.

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 August 2009

profound thoughts sir....very meaningful indeed......10

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