Street Boy! Poem by Triston Jackson

Street Boy!

Rating: 3.8


I'm a street boy
I ain't ready for love
But i'm real with you girl I buy ya diamonds and pearls
I put prada on ya feet
cause you perfect to me
that's why I spend $100 on a meal to eat
man forget them others they can have dog treats
and you know you come first
cause you quench my thirst
girl I want you on myside till I leave this Earth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lauren Frazier 21 November 2006

This is wonderful. It flows and is just...wow.

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Patricia Gale 20 November 2006

A poetic song within itself

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Sandra Fowler 20 November 2006

Very nice, Tristan. One could almost dance to the rhythm of these verses. Kind regards, Sandra

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Nicola Burkett 20 November 2006

pretty impressive.....a modern twist of the old fasion tale of romance Sincerely Nickie x x

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Jessica Roberts 20 November 2006

nice job lets see some more

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