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You've been through so much trauma
And you still stand strong
You're one of gods better people
Your soul sings a song
Your eyes tell a story
Of the paths you have tread
But you're not as i'd put it
Very easily led
I've just started to notice
How an angel would be
As my heart feels warmer
When you glance over at me
I could never imagine
Having to cope with your pain
Yet you're still living life
Striving for something to gain
You don't give up easy
An i admire that in you
Through you weary eyes
You must see a clear view
When your time on earth is up
There's not a question in mind
Heaven holds a place for you
That is reserved in time
Lucy Vernezze
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Monday, September 25, 2006 |
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Wednesday, September 22, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Strength Of A Lady
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Lucy Vernezze
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***** ********* (9/25/2006 8:03:00 AM)
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The only typo I could find Lucy was 'reserved' on the last line. I am glad that this womans struggle is an inspiration to you and your poem a sweet tribute to her determination to keep going forward. A Compassionate write, don't allow anyone to knock it out of you, Tai
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