Strict Neutrality Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strict Neutrality

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It is matter of strict neutrality
Not to underestimate one's own capacity
It is gift from nature
That we are human being of future

Men may have their dominance
But women have it by chance
The position is never aimed
The superiority complex is always claimed

Social back ground plays big role
Education too gives big call
Women can have their own thinking
Legitimate reason to withdraw before sinking

The days of simple sex object have gone
Enough water has there after being flown
No one can take them for granted
That position is not thought of or wanted

I came across illusion
Where there prevailed illogical confusion
What women must do as right choice?
To marry or remain aloof with pure promises

"The woman is burden and needs cover"
The old prophecy about them is now over
They have now their own way of dealing
A special care for own protection and wound's healing

Woman should never marry as spent force
But lead not rest of the life with remorse too
As women have always fallen in wrong trap
With simple miscalculation in one step

It is nature's rule of law
No one can direct for conclusion to draw
It is matter of strict individuality
It is matter of pride to be called world beauty

Man and woman can be considered as one
If not, then Life can be retrieved by none
The journey may be full of thorns
But the danger is lurking at each turn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2012

Good verse! George Collett5 minutes ago This one has a great message! The issue here is with the flow or cadence of the poem! It does not flow as well as it could! A bit of work makes this very good poem into a great poem! Keep up the good work Oh Bard! You have poetic skill! Comment +1 ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2012

Unbreakable Lucas13 minutes ago I like that one

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2012

It is matter of strict neutrality Not to underestimate one’s own capacity It is gift from nature That we are human being of future

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