Strobe Insomnia Poem by Martin O'Neill

Strobe Insomnia

Rating: 5.0


Clenched gatherings of black leathery wings
agitating against my breast
snittering and brushing close
As night stretches itself
against my squeezed eyelids
held inviolate against the
admisson of wakefulness
Lest it unravel me, give form
to the strobing thoughts illumunating
the bones of my mind.
Garish in their nakedness
and vulnerability
Made flesh
Dawn seeps into being bringing respite
and red eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Strobe insomnia , wow! ! !

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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Strobe insomnia , wow! ! !

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Patti Masterman 02 March 2012

I like what you did here, and the strobe effect also makes me think of the way life grinds us down, one bright light, one missile at a time, the sticks stones and arrows of daily life, until we're completely worn down, red eyed..nice.

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Valerie Dohren 02 March 2012

Very descriptive - insomnia is my bugbear! ! !

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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