! Struck By The Oner (Ph Rating Commentary) Poem by Alice Vedral Rivera

! Struck By The Oner (Ph Rating Commentary)



There are those
Who complain
When struck by
The Oner

There are those
Who remove
All the ones
They've received

There are those
Who feel that
The Oner
Must hate them

BUT

Then there are those
Who show off - nay
Flaunt their ones with
Impunity

Flattered by the
Time spent rating
Brilliant poem
After poem

Knowing that the
Oner was just
Simply saying
'You're # 1'

Tuesday, September 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: rating
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was inspired by the person or persons voting on poems with a 1 in order to maliciously lower stats and originally posted by me on PH in 2007 © Alice Vedral Rivera - 2007
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 October 2014

Simply saying but marvellous work. Nice poem written expressing personal views.

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Alice Vedral Rivera

Alice Vedral Rivera

Chicago, Illinois, USA
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