Such Condition Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Such Condition
Yes, you will be alone
Dejected and Lone
With no desire to live more
Life had more satire
I feel with burden
People say it is heaven
Beautiful and nice place
I feel it is not suitable for poor race
What did I do?
Worked hard for truth
Earned little to pull cart
The position was from the start
Honesty does pay
But does not take you long way
You are worn out due to fatigue
You are seized with diseases like plague
The world is for influential
Who can enjoy and live in palatial building
Make family happy and impart good education
What I can do for them in such condition?
clipped, doesn't flow well Monica Hoover1 minute ago i think you left out the little words for the creative structure but it doesn't flow well at all without them. the over-all concept is great, keep working on your structure and rhythm.
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Deep Patricia Batteate9 hours ago You hold on because paradise is waiting. This earth is being ran by Satan and his rule is nearly over. Good life is waiting for all who believe and stay true to God....good poem. Comment 0