Such Fate Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Such Fate

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I could believe eyes and recognize
As if I had lost coveted prize
The fellow in mirror
Looked stranger and terror

With ugly face and hidden face lines
I thought of pushing him in side lines
How bad it reflected when I thought?
Was this the gain I had always fought for?

Where the innocence had gone?
What stupid things have I have done?
I had no answer but only regret
I have no words to state

I felt so helpless
Even though it was honorable face
To outside world and family member
I had lot more to remember

It is long way that I have reached
Deceived many and wrongly preached
It is my selfish story
I can only express sorry

May human life is as such
Honesty pays little or not much
I have not suffered yet
But wait for gladly if arrives such fate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

I could believe eyes and recognize As if I had lost coveted prize

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Confusing Cheryl ChandlerLess than a minute ago My apology It could have been written better. The message would have to be assumed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

express it! Simon Li2 minutes ago good expression write as you feel Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Remorse. Emmanuel BandohLess than a minute ago Feeling remorseful, but for what, I do not know. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Good Cody Leckey2 minutes ago Swell Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

welcome rohani daud 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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welcom e shyla dominic 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

x Lisa Lombardi Nicely Indirectly said, however if directly admitting ur mistake cud be a direct approach...10 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

ACCEPTANCE! ! ! Jawahar Gupta49 minutes ago TRUE MIND SPEAKING, , ! ! ! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Atmanang biddhi (sanskrit) or ' know thyself '. Phanibhusan Basu59 minutes ago good presentation!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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