Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Veteran Poet - 3,042 Points (18/2/71 / Jaipur, india)

Sucked into sorrow

When did it happen
When you quit
Loving me

What was about me
That you wanted to be free

Am I so ugly,
so full of disgrace
That in your heart
I just lost my place

I know there are many
Much better for yea
But tell me just one time
Why did you batter me

The ache in my heart
Throbs with every pulse rate
I try to forget
It comes back with rage

Time is a healer
The wise ones say
Will I have that time
When I do not want to stay

Submitted: Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: Sad

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,042 Points Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (8/24/2014 1:36:00 PM)

    Thanks David and wonder I am so averse to clichéd phrases and questionable theories (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,477 Points Amitava Sur (8/24/2014 1:23:00 PM)

    The intense grief of the broken heart is very clearly expressed.. I doubt those wises who say Time is the Healer ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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