Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Silver Star - 3,432 Points (18/2/71 / Jaipur, india)

Sucked Into Sorrow - Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

When did it happen
When you quit
Loving me

What was about me
That you wanted to be free

Am I so ugly,
so full of disgrace
That in your heart
I just lost my place

I know there are many
Much better for yea
But tell me just one time
Why did you batter me

The ache in my heart
Throbs with every pulse rate
I try to forget
It comes back with rage

Time is a healer
The wise ones say
Will I have that time
When I do not want to stay


Comments about Sucked Into Sorrow by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

  • Silver Star - 3,432 Points Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (8/24/2014 1:36:00 PM)

    Thanks David and Amitav.....no wonder I am so averse to clichéd phrases and questionable theories (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,352 Points Amitava Sur (8/24/2014 1:23:00 PM)

    The intense grief of the broken heart is very clearly expressed.. I doubt those wises who say Time is the Healer ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 19, 2014



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