Sue My Heart Poem by kibrom habtu
Sue My Heart
Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Before my hands reached to you in the night to call
My eyes saw thy serene joy emptying my soul
My ears heard thy sweet judgment provoking the pieces of my heart….unbending
My knees felt the long distance while the grievous justice remains forgotten
And I sat
Am I to thee a fortunate lover?
Though I was caught by love and I went undercover
Beneath the moment of being a lad
I betrayed life that has never been planned
I searched my heart and found nothing to remember
Shall I summon my self to thee and thrice times must I beseech or surrender
Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Beneath the moment of being a lad
I betrayed life that has never been planed
And there I was….broken hearted, longing to search for thee along the river Nile
But you sued my heart with thy wistful smile
A heart felt piece of writing. A learning curve for love.
Beautiful, a deep heart feeling expressed dear friend at your age this is a very mature pience of poetry wish you all succes in future
Romantic...Sentimental...Written with an urge in the heart.. very good. Keep the spirit flowing like this. Love is eternal..
I LIKE this! It is a delightful, fascinating poetic depiction of falling in love. Beautiful! I love especially the concluding line about her wistful smile....saving you by sueing your heart? The entire description of falling in love, as you've thus painted it, is very interesting and I quite enjoyed it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 12:25:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very heartfelt piece.A learning curve for love.