Janie Wassler


Sugar Waves - Poem by Janie Wassler

The sub sparkles like sugar on the lake
Dazzling before my eyes
Which are also blinded by the sun

And two lone geese watch warily
As my dog goes inside to eat
Does she nor see the splendor of the outdoors?

The magic of nature
Dancing before my eyes
Dance, water sugar, dance on...


Comments about Sugar Waves by Janie Wassler

  • Rookie - 194 Points Anand Brown (5/13/2014 3:48:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, engaging and absorbing :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 29,399 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/13/2014 2:57:00 AM)

    magic of nature is o.k. but sugar in the lake not understood and in anyway it is a nice poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 13, 2014


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