Sugar Waves Poem by Janie Wassler

Sugar Waves



The sub sparkles like sugar on the lake
Dazzling before my eyes
Which are also blinded by the sun

And two lone geese watch warily
As my dog goes inside to eat
Does she nor see the splendor of the outdoors?

The magic of nature
Dancing before my eyes
Dance, water sugar, dance on...

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Brown 13 May 2014

Lovely poem, engaging and absorbing :)

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magic of nature is o.k. but sugar in the lake not understood and in anyway it is a nice poem.

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