Suiceide Poem by DAVIDIA KARTINA

Suiceide

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Suicide is like ICE
It cuts like a fice
It is not a vice
But an awful bice

Suicide is like FIRE
Not a person searching for HIRE
Dont dare call me a liar
Or you'll be a deny-er

Suicide is my SOUL
And like an innocent fowl
It eats the heart it stole
And so I say LOL

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 November 2021

The poem is impressive, the suicide not. Very sad to create poems like this. I know you can better.

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Brittany Ryan 15 June 2009

seriously? ? ? i no enough people have already bagged on you for this but come. you can do better then this.

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Crissy Chumley 08 April 2008

i think that you should be more serious when you write something like suiceide but if you are just messing around about it it kind of offends me that you would take something so serious and make it silly and funny

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jazmine kristen 13 June 2007

WOW............ that is really goood.ur great.

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Victoria Marie 07 June 2007

Wow....that was good.

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