Suicidal Heaven Poem by lizzy smith

Suicidal Heaven

Rating: 5.0


I'm in a suicidal heaven
Where everyone has killed themselves
I was brain-washed to believe
That I would be sent down to hell

But here I stand
In this suicidal land
And I see no god
nothing, zilch, not

For he does not care
Of all in despair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 13 August 2008

i have to disagree with u about the idea of the poem but i love it anyway. it is brilliant.u always use captivating titles.

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Marvin Brato 11 August 2008

Not after your have cleared your mind my dear! A 10.

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