Suicide Is Redemption Poem by rody young

Suicide Is Redemption



death sets in my head like a heavy fog, it smiles it black tooth grin he brings me warmth and comfort, i feel no fear
my sences numb like novacane, i smile to put on a front and i know noone really cares, you say you do but you not even
here, laugh haha show me tell me how you really feel, the blade the cold blue steel brings sences to my flesh,
would you care ask your self, would it bother you? now the final hour aprotches your not here when i called for help,
you ignored my cry for help; the skinn splits with a swipe now my life line is running out, i call out noone is there to hear
my crys, you wernt there for me when i needed you, bone fragments and brain matter my life flashes before my eyes,
i see all my mistakes i have made, i finaly have my release if you were here you couldt stop what i have done iv gave up,
all that is real all that was all that was here nolonger, ask yourself why did you not help? i needed you and you were not here,
no i lie still on the floor no movement notheing, now you see me, frantic you became, lost comfused the same state i was in,
noww you need help you dont know what to do, your in distrot scared alone dont know what to do, that same state i was
in you are now you ask yourself why why why? ? ? you dont have an answer and yet all along iv gave you tha answer the ression
why i have done this but you never saw it and that is why im laying here one the floor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Grimes 29 January 2011

The feeling of helplessness and the attention that never came. Raw and emotional. Left me remembering those emotions and pain. Great poem.

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