Suicide Note Poem by Neil Crosby

Suicide Note

Rating: 5.0


I live in a life of endless lies
Waiting for my demise
Twisted metal
A fallen petal
Blood falling like snow
Everyone will know
My end is near
Farewell my dear
Whether by a knife at my heart or throat
My suicide note

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great poem, i can feel the emotion.. Ive been there, and ive fallen, hard, but poems helped me back. great wording.

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its a really good poem ive been there im there and most likely will always be there and if you ever need anyone to talk to im always here for you

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Sayz LFlynn 02 December 2009

short but full of emotions! great poem! !

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Tyease Collins 07 February 2009

It was short but i loved it. I loved the fallen petal. You are a really nice poet =] {my new inspiration} 10/10 -Tyease

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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Awesome and Beautiful

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Sweet Death 08 November 2008

Awesome N dats all i have 2say bout dat

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Kaylee Questionable 01 November 2008

I really really like this poem specially the lines (twisted metal / a fallen petal) you have talent you can really feel the emotion.

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Neil Crosby

Neil Crosby

Fort Knox, Kentucky
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