Suicide, Slow Or Fast… Poem by Ray Lucero

Suicide, Slow Or Fast…

Rating: 4.7


SIDS babies are the smart ones, they exit early

Adolescents step between cars for a quick out,
or drown in a neighbor’s pool

Teens have the most options with drugs, alcohol,
Anorexia, fast cars and access to guns

Middle-years get to pick from hundreds of prescription drugs, breast/ovarian/prostate cancers or a plethora other diseases

Elders get to have strokes, heart attacks, diabetes and the like

Suicide slow or fast…
No matter, as Death has great patience

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

truth is a bitter pill chilllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

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Linda Weischedel 08 November 2007

Wheeeew Ray, this is a wicked poem, but is right on the marker in truth. Always, Linda

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Craig Steiger 08 November 2007

kind of grim but true enough.... ive known it myself

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