Suku Suku* Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Suku Suku*

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Suku* suku* do you hear?
We are close and very near
I tease and please you too
Love is bound and very true

Tree is giant and very big
We all dance freely and sing
I take your hand and make to run
We all have joy and enormous fun

You are dedicated poetess
That looks from your bright face
You are lovely and beautiful
With full of smiles and delightful

We are all after you to hold
But you are clever and bold
You give slip and go away
We find you no where and give up the way

At least I created stir and enjoyed
I made plan and ploy
I ran after you and drew near
Just to whisper something in your ear

You went down like 'touch me not'
But I had made the headway after being bravely fought
You were prize catch and I took you in arm
It was all of sudden for you like desert storm

You gave up after some hesitation
That was beginning of good relation
I kissed your hand and released at once
This was the pure feeling and golden chance

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
• Suku.. Sukmawati.. name *
• The poem revolves round big green tree and is pure imagination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 March 2013

Jen Walls Nice one...refreshing...you darling tree hugger! Hasmukh 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2013

Wonderful imagination. Loved your GREAT WRITE Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Mar 14,2013 ________________________________________ As soon as I saw the title, I was reminded of the old Shammi Kapoor starrer Janglee song Aiaiyya, karun mai kya Suku, Suku, Kho gaya dil mera Suku, Suku... But it turned out to be a wonderful, nostalgic tribute toyour Sukmawati...A nice one Mr. Mehta. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Mar 14,2013 ________________________________________ And nostalgia too! An unknown pain. Liked UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala Mar 14,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2013

Ram Nath Woooooooow.....Nice...Fabulous..........You went down like “touch me not” But I had made the headway after being bravely fought You were prize catch and I took you in arm It was all of sudden for you like desert storm 38 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2013

Carol Bird I can see why you would be inspired around this tree.2 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Eak Eakkarash likes this. Alex Basalama likes this. Jen Walls Wow! Nice one dear Hasmukh You darling tree hugger! Hugs to you brother 42 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2013

Jen Walls Wow! Nice one dear Hasmukh You darling tree hugger! Hugs to you brother 42 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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