Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Suku Suku*


Suku* suku* do you hear?
We are close and very near
I tease and please you too
Love is bound and very true

Tree is giant and very big
We all dance freely and sing
I take your hand and make to run
We all have joy and enormous fun

You are dedicated poetess
That looks from your bright face
You are lovely and beautiful
With full of smiles and delightful

We are all after you to hold
But you are clever and bold
You give slip and go away
We find you no where and give up the way

At least I created stir and enjoyed
I made plan and ploy
I ran after you and drew near
Just to whisper something in your ear

You went down like 'touch me not'
But I had made the headway after being bravely fought
You were prize catch and I took you in arm
It was all of sudden for you like desert storm

You gave up after some hesitation
That was beginning of good relation
I kissed your hand and released at once
This was the pure feeling and golden chance

Submitted: Wednesday, March 13, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 13, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

• Suku.. Sukmawati.. name *
• The poem revolves round big green tree and is pure imagination

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2013 8:19:00 PM)

    Wonderful imagination. Loved your GREAT WRITE
    Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai
    Mar 14,2013
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    As soon as I saw the title, I was reminded of the old Shammi Kapoor starrer Janglee song Aiaiyya, karun mai kya Suku, Suku, Kho gaya dil mera Suku, Suku...
    But it turned out to be a wonderful, nostalgic tribute toyour Sukmawati...A nice one Mr. Mehta.

    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India
    Mar 14,2013
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    And nostalgia too! An unknown pain. Liked

    UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala
    Mar 14,2013 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2013 7:40:00 AM)

    Ram Nath Woooooooow.....Nice...Fabulous..........You went down like “touch me not”
    But I had made the headway after being bravely fought
    You were prize catch and I took you in arm
    It was all of sudden for you like desert storm
    38 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    Carol Bird I can see why you would be inspired around this tree.2 hours ago · Unlike · 1
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    Jen Walls Wow! Nice one dear Hasmukh You darling tree hugger! Hugs to you brother 42 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

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