Summer Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Summer

Rating: 4.9


Summer is here.
The sound of
Birds singing in my ear,
As do doves.
While out and about sweating.
I'm ready to dive in the pool.
Amazing how hot it's getting.
A better place is school.
But the doors are closed
Everyone's out on vacation.
Hardly anyone out on the road.
Their all having summer celebration.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 15 October 2017

A Beautifully Cheerful Fun One On Summer! ! ! ! ! Very Interesting! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Jeanette Telusma 16 October 2017

Thank you for your generous comment, may you be blessed beyond measure.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2017

Heat! ! Sweating! SUMMER. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jeanette Telusma 03 September 2017

Thank you so much for your comment, Edward.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2017

Sound of singing birds in summer motivate mind more and more. School is better place to learn. During summer vacation happens and doors of schools are closed. An interesting poem is very well crafted and shared. A nice imagery is drawn here.10

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Jeanette Telusma 03 September 2017

So kind of your, Mr Kumarmani, thanks for commenting.

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