Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 40 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Summer Haiku - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

(Dedicated to neat poet Catrina Heart)

1. Summer dragon runs
Upon the plant and animal
Motionless Nature

2. Summer cloud flies
Dream bud wake up sluggishly
Jovial love letter

3. Cloud upon trees
Moving worship around
Love sprouts slowly

4. Summer summer-love
Rain love goes down leisurely
Sleepy grass laughing


Comments about Summer Haiku by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Rookie Identification Accepted (6/22/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    10++ one of the best haikus I've ever read (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 81 Points Maia Padua (6/2/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    all but lovely summer haiku..
    sweet...
    beautiful summer built beautifully
    love dwells in every lines..
    10+++

    _maia_ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 390 Points Marie Shine (5/27/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    Wonderful and very sweet Haiku, perfect in format and a lovely well deserved tribute to a great poetess on PH.
    A well deserved 10 from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gargi Saha (5/24/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yannis Voultos (5/18/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    Great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lateef Jan Afridi (5/17/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    lovely write, i like the way you write dear, carry on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gi Galen (5/15/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    ‘ Love sprouts slowly ’
    Yes, for that roots deeply starts up …
    Beautiful poem, aroma of the 'sky'.../10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/15/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    those are nice haikus on summer. well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wildan F Rabbani (5/15/2009 3:50:00 AM)

    a beautiful scene... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janri Gogeshvili (5/14/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    Ambiguous poetic 'kaleidoscope'
    lovely. /10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (5/14/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    lovely images of summer, clouds and rain. you have built it beautifully.10

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raquel Rebecca (5/13/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    This one is very beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tshering Tobgay (5/13/2009 9:37:00 AM)

    i would say that it is a good poem and every one of us who visits this site should make a point to visit this poem, well written, and i appreciate it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 446 Points Indira Renganathan (5/13/2009 1:53:00 AM)

    The last stanza is soothing in scorching summer...a different way of depicting summer...excellent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (5/12/2009 11:51:00 PM)

    loved them most! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Julius Babarinsa (5/12/2009 6:14:00 PM)

    Ashraful, the Summer Haiku is a brilliant work. Never stop writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christos Rodoulla Tsiailis (5/12/2009 4:22:00 PM)

    dear friend, though your poems thematically seem very interesting, I would choose not to call them 'haikus' as they do not follow the traditional and stereotypical pattern in their number of syllables and the necessary inclusion of a colour choice in each. I am sorry for my negation, but I feel I must be strict if you want my sincere help (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (5/12/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    Summer love
    Rain drop
    Sleepy grass
    its really a very impressive and meaningful haiko..wonderful...lovely and really heart touching one...respect your words as comments..hope we be in touched sharing words... thanks...yours (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roland Bastien (5/12/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    . Summer love
    Rain drop
    Sleepy grass
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    lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Obed Souza (5/12/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    Summer love rain dropp sleepy grass!
    Dry soil needs rain drops.. there´s always a way out for life...
    Nice doing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 18, 2009


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