Summer Rain Summer Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Summer Rain Summer

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I am a comer new comer
You tell me tale summer.
Oh summer you tell me
Cheer in mind you see.

Although it is our season
Rainy time within reason
Region is wet in hope less
You have come to us bless.

Little drops here fall of rain,
Still you wash out our pain.
Veil you cover in the warm,
Rainy summer humours form.

Waves come more on sea,
We bow down before knee.
Plays drum tall a drummer
You tell me tale summer.

I am a comer new comer
You tell me tale summer.

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,life and death,love and art,rainy season ,spiritual,summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A soul is a new comer on birth. Here rainy season is there. But less rain is going on still this washes pain of many to remove scarcity of water. Due to less cloud in sky we feel warmness of summer. Eagerly we feel two seasons of summer and rainy time in one perception. Birth and death also we fell at the same life. Life proceeds and we hear the tale of action of our lives. Here a soul urges rainy summer to tell him a tale of such mood of life. This is the theme of this poem. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

I enjoy your analogies, Kumarmani

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Valsa George 29 September 2015

Though there is scarcity of rain in summer, the occasional drizzles help the land cool down! Those little drops are like a shower of mercy from above and wipe away the pain! I feel the coolness of a drizzle!

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Dogma Daniman 11 October 2020

Summer rain gives a glimpse of joy with beauty of watching it. This poem is nice.

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Isabel Pimentel 10 October 2020

Sometimes during summer rain happens. We witness this truth. Rainbow forms getting summer light I have seen.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 June 2019

Yes, summer is the season to ask for rainy season. It is hot summer that rains are good. The poem is written as if meant for children and as Akhtar Sahab said there is an element of music in it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

In the warm. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2015

a beautiful poem with an element of music in it......................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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