Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,153 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Summer’s Dance (Pantoum) - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Summer rainbow's ribbon still stretches in the blue rain
As green snakes dance to the tune of charmers jazz flutes
Blue butterflies chase velvety bumble bees singing duets in vain
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Comments about Summer’s Dance (Pantoum) by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie - 5 Points Callie Carroll (8/9/2011 9:23:00 PM)

    This is a very complicated form which you do very well. I especially like the image of a summer rainbow as a ribbon. I do sometimes get lost in the color words, especially 'green.' (Report) Reply

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