Summer Solace Poem by Yasmin Khan

Summer Solace

Rating: 4.5


The day passes and cool shades
Move on stealthily, creeps in dusk
Air sways, darkness cascades

Sky bathes in hazy hues
Red, orange, purple, grey
The stars blink, moon tenderly moves

The evening comes, pinions close
Silence and moon beams hand in hand
Wishes in the heart seek repose

Woes and worries float softly back
Cries of the day now sighs mild
Mellow grief with sweet smack

The sun descends on a kingly pace
Tulips fade in shroud dark and deep
Solemn thoughts find summer solace

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Early summer evenings feel soft and mellow, day's woes and worries melt away in evening shades.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2013

Fine description of evening. thanks.

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Sallam Yassin 25 April 2013

colorful warm breeze flowing from words with kind deep sense of desire that got her right time beneath the sweet shades of summer nice written and pleasure to read

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Shahzia Batool 25 April 2013

A fine example of Cadence...a painting written, or a poem painted! ! ! you know it's beautiful! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2013

Lovely poem, very descriptive and atmospheric.

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Saadat Tahir 24 April 2013

vivid word picture in shades of HD color and grays too an apt seasonal poem written in a less commonly used aba cdc rhyme scheme classical and endearing liked it :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 April 2013

shroud dark and deep, darkness cascades nice imagery it sound like someone whispers nice

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