Summers Gentletouch. [nature] Poem by alan brown

Summers Gentletouch. [nature]

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The Sunlight flickered in her auburn hair
as she walked upon the wandering sands
Like a mirage drifting upon a sea of gold
Her beauty surpassed
All that she met in her path

Shimmering light lit her smile
giving birth too the world.
That Mother nature longed for evenly
between the seasons.
As she approached her destiny.

Flowers bloomed
As her wanton hand
waved delight over the land.
As trees reached for the sky breaking leaf.
In the order of the world
set by our seasons.

Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alan brown 03 May 2018

Thank you Jazib for your wonderful comments

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Alan B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

The sunlight flickered is definitely very bright and motivational light. Shimmering light has lit her smile. Nature has become graceful. Flowers have bloomed and beauty is surpassed. This poem has rich imagery and brilliantly penned...10

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Carl Roussell 27 April 2018

My favourite line, As trees reached for the sky breaking leaf - you can see the trees growing. Nice poem.

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The Muse 24 April 2018

Enjoyed your poem that touches nature so gently. Correct too second stanza.

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