Sun Poem by Belleza Edella Marian SwanCullen

Sun



~♥ ♦ ♥ ~

The sun is like a lamp,
Which gives light.
The sun is a water,
Which maintains life.

The sun give us light,
In times of darkness.
The sun maintains life,
Every time and everyday.

The sun is very important
In the life of man
So we should use it wisely
And give importance to it.

~♥ ♦ ♥ ~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 05 September 2009

i liked the metaphor(the sun is a water) ....good description for our beautiful sun.......i wish i can hug the sun but i won't return to my home..haha.. i wrote a poem also for the sun if you want to read it(sparkle, sparkle little star)

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