You are the source of heat and light.
During the morning, the girl flies her kite,
And the flowers sway with delight.
You ignite the whole universe..Yes it's right.
You are the center of our solar system.
You revolve around your axis in a specific system.
Your temperature is so high,
If anyone came nearer to you, he certainly would say to his life Goodbye! !
You are a double edged weapon;
Your heat and light would destroy us,
And also rescue us from the freeze's cuss.
You are a powerful star
And you are from us so far.
You appear with every new dawn
And you give the day a beautiful tone.
You are important to the human, the animal and the plant,
Without you we can't live, Yes we can't! !
i took a similar poem at school....the poet also talked about the sun.....but not as wonderful as u.......great one lovely to read......10++
i loved this poem, i love the way you express yourself through poetry, keep on we want more! ! ! KUJI! :)
With light from the sun, nature's beauty can be viewed at sight.
Many thanks for your vote. And I think your poem deseves 10+++
so sweet and lovely poem, you are right the sun is so beautiful and important.well done and keep writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful, excellent and rich enough... merna dear, you did it realy a very perfect way... inspiring poem... good idea and written sweeeeet... hey you are advancing and the each new poem is better then the previous..thanks merna for all of you love and concerns and comments...1000 ++++++++++