Sun Haiku Poem by Vega Destiny Star

Sun Haiku

Rating: 4.0


Giant fireball.
Gives light and life to the earth.
Runs across the sky.

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Hannah K. 01 April 2006

This is a great oem and I enjoyed reading it. Maybe you could read my poems and give me some hints on how to get more detail possibly. You seem to have a very strong sense of words and I would love some tips from you.

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