ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 16 Points (Bulgaria)

Sun Sand Sea - Poem by ONElia AVElar

Honey from the sky,
sugar under feet,
warm turquoise tea.
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Comments about Sun Sand Sea by ONElia AVElar

  • (9/29/2014 4:10:00 PM)


    simply hedonistic and spiritually profound with its connection to the free spirit. and life's basic needs...good poem.. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/29/2014 10:18:00 AM)


    I dont like this poem. It doesnt make that much sense and the alluding could be prettier with its vagueness. (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2014 10:00:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem with such nice pleasant words befitting to the poem. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (9/29/2013 7:17:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem with a befitting title. Not that erotic, as some have observed. (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2013 6:25:00 AM)


    Wonderful! Love the imagery and feel! :) (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2013 1:53:00 AM)


    Beautifully pleasant. Made me smile in its quirky nature. Karen (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2009 9:24:00 AM)


    I like it very much. I always like when there's a splinter that makes a happy picture somewhat sad... A beatiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2008 12:54:00 PM)


    Hello onelia, Beautiful poems... A fantastic trip to Greece... 10........
    Thanks for fine words...
    Kindest regards,
    Tsira
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  • (11/8/2008 12:27:00 AM)


    Sugar under feet. Perfect words to explain the seaside today. It seems no one can understand it or nature. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/9/2008 8:55:00 AM)


    Amazing poem with newer content. Nice.10+ (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2008 3:43:00 AM)


    Excellent, erotic poem.A full 10 for you. (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2008 1:10:00 AM)


    How did I miss this one? Beautiful...has a flow that gives it the right amount of erotic and sensual pleasure...love it...Coach (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/27/2008 2:05:00 PM)


    Its a fine composition! .............10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/26/2008 6:04:00 AM)


    The rhythmic flow of your poem is subtly and confidently dealt with ease in this highly gay poem that is spiritually engaging. Thanks, arya (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2008 11:58:00 AM)


    the first three lines paint sun sand and sea beautifully...the susequent lines dance in rhyme... words tea/sea...knees/greece...dinging donging...poem ten grade (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (8/5/2008 1:24:00 AM)


    Your style is musical and the turquoise tea is dainty 10 and more stars (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2008 4:01:00 AM)


    Sigh.... delicious and just a slight bit of erotica thrown in (or is that my dirty mind? LOL!) . Your descriptives of a wonderful hot country make me yearn to return to dip my toes in its waters.... HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2008 10:36:00 AM)


    Your senses and sensations are shared, beautifully paced, across the page..... sigh.... to be there.... t x (Report) Reply

  • Donall Dempsey (8/3/2008 5:19:00 AM)


    I am letting my senses revel in your toughts...indulging in your words. Warm turquoise tea is such a beauiful phrase in itself.

    love Donall Donall
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  • (8/3/2008 2:17:00 AM)


    Mamma Mia.... wish i was there at the same time you were there... SIGH you made me remember (but I will not tell) .. aroha xxzzzz (Report) Reply










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