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Lilac Wine


Sunshine on a Cloudy Day


Let me be the sun that graces your cloudy days
Let me be the sun that illuminates your dark and cold days
Let me be the sun that rises and sets in your eyes
Let me be the sun that fills your spirit with laughter and smiles
Let me be the sun that warms your soul and graces your heart
Let me be the sun that takes you way above the heavens

Let me lay before you my golden rays to light your way
Let me lay before you my dazzling sunbeams to chase away the shadows
Let me fill your life with love joy and inspiration
Let me chase away your slumber and fill your days with dreams
Let not the sun set evermore
Let me be the sun in your life forevermore

Submitted: Wednesday, June 27, 2007
Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011

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  • Duncan Wyllie (10/24/2007 12:15:00 PM)

    YES! ...YES! .....oh and................((((((YES! ! ! ! ! !)))))))
    BRILLIANT! ! ! ! , but then, it is from a kind and caring soul
    Take care
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Jack Tex (7/21/2007 11:36:00 AM)

    You totally left me speechless. It sure is one of the best poems I've ever come across + fantastic use of 'sun', you rock, no doubt about it.

    Yours
    Mohammad n Stuff (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/2/2007 4:43:00 PM)

    Very Nice Work, young lady...a Poem with much lyrical potential...Lots of verve
    and passion pour from your words, here...Stanzaic structure is pristine...
    Rock Solid Work, Lilac!

    FjR (Report) Reply

  • Marci Made (6/27/2007 12:47:00 PM)

    This poem lilac is a work of art, a marvelous touching wonder from a loving heart like yours...I know this for you are a loving friend.....This is a keeper for my not so long list.... hope you're feeling better.......I love this! ~~~~~~~~love, marci.xo :) (Report) Reply

  • David Harris (6/27/2007 4:12:00 AM)

    Yes. Yes. YES. You can light up my world with sunshine and warmth any day and you normally do when you comment on my poems. Beautifully written and brought the sunshine into my room as I read it. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

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