Super Moon Poem by Khairul Ahsan
Super Moon
Tonight, everybody is busy in watching
The golden moon, the Super Moon.
Supposedly, the last visible super moon
Of this year, will tonight be in full bloom.
Here, there and everywhere, people are
Gazing at the super moon a sky afar,
And frantically calling to remind each other
To view the full moon wherever they are.
My friends told me too, on phone, Skype
And Facebook, but I ignored this hype.
Not impressed, as a brighter full moon in lieu
Descends on my bed when I sleep with you.
Dhaka
10 September 2014
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Very nice poem. I guess she, the angel, is your grand daughter. Its an excellent poem and very nice to read.
Thank you for reading the poem, @Gary H, and leaving a kind comment.
Nicely crafted. Metaphorically comparing your love to the moon and making her your 'super moon' is amazing. Ignoring the hype from friends and keeping her secretely in your bed is visible in how you have hidden the last two lines. Short but very romantic.....well done!
@Abekah Emmanuel Your kind and generous appreciation of the poem has inspired me a lot. Thank you Abekah.
I am glad you read the poem with attention. And thank you for the comment, Darla.
So romantic you are! It's nice to compare your beloved with moon.
Thank you @Neela Nath Das, my beloved is truly beautiful like a moon.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:05:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful..why need the far moon once moon is near at heart distance..lovely 10