Surfing Cloudy Days Poem by Morteza Dehnaee

Surfing Cloudy Days

Rating: 5.0


Flying high with wings of smoke,
When man surfs on his cloudy days,
Awaiting for more depth and heat,
When cigar dispersing his life rays.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 30 August 2005

Very nice...I like the descriptions you gave to represent items in your poem...very vivid.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 29 August 2005

Very nice tribute! Well done.

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