Surprising Love Poem by Melisa TEE

Surprising Love

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When they say opposites attract I guess it’s true,
I never thought I would be ending up with you.
Whenever I see you I can hear my heart beating way too fast
I have never felt like this, never in the past.
I find myself doing anything for you.

I’d happily take a bullet for you,
Climb the highest mountain or live in the zoo.
Whatever you desire I shall give you just to see you smile.

Nothing will ever stop me from loving you like crazy.
I am obsessed with you,
And I hope you feel the same too.
There was a hole in my heart but you came and filled it,
I am unconditionally in love with you and I hope you know it.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem I wrote around 4 years ago however I thought I would post it so I can start to see improvements in my work over the years and get some good feedback I can learn from!
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