Survivor's Aid. Poem by Fay Slimm

Survivor's Aid.

Rating: 4.8


Compounding small troubles, clouds sweep across
Mind, and envelope the will at times, test
Out strengths, and feed doubt. We're at a loss
To understand why, but forcing our best
Face forward, we try. We are Survivors,
So we believe. Fragile minds conceive fear
In storms of emotion, but will revive
If given a seed of faint hope. Clearing
Our sight, we inhale fresh thinking again
And see sense. Ability to reason
Will surface only if we find painful
Any hurt.. Survivors take seasonal
Checks on life. They delight in heartfelt peace
Which early forgives, so brings love's increase.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 09 February 2009

Your words bring beauty to the eye and warmth to the heart Fay, tremendous write Chris 10 ++++

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Fiona Davidson 09 February 2009

Another inspiring write Fay....your talent is wonderful....thank you...Fi...10++

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 February 2009

Talk about music in a poem! ! ! Wow. And I spotted no compromise. Excellent, Fay. Hx

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Can I be a peace within the boxes of this Band Aid! ! ! It sings high on care and caress and your last line is a stunning instinct... set in as human survival story.. They delight in heartfelt peace which early forgives, so brings love's increase...... TENderly and with aroha Deana xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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