Sweet Childhood Memories Poem by Ben No

Sweet Childhood Memories

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It's just how it is.
Sorry.
Condemned,
like a building no longer fit
for habitation,
where the dry rot has spread to our hearts
and the termites are the tiny monarchs
of our crumbling ambitions.
When I was a child,
we always thought such houses
to be haunted.
Maybe our young selves
heard an echo of some truth;
that a haunting was coming.
Not for these broken-windowed wrecks
but for us.

Sorry.
It's just how it is.

Sleep tight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 27 September 2012

Ben No More poetic language than some of your others, but with that same stoic storyteller sense to it. -chuck

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Linda Weischedel 31 December 2007

GREAT POEM BEN This is my favorite part of your poem: When I was a child, we always thought such houses to be haunted. Maybe our young selves heard an echo of some truth; that a haunting was coming.

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