Sweet Lullabies (1/11/10) Poem by Kayleigh ....

Sweet Lullabies (1/11/10)



Sweet lullabies
Carry me away
Like a mid Autumn's breeze
And I'll dance with the leaves that sway and float down
Like a colorful red and orange display

Sweet lullabies
Clear this troubled mind
Like a wide open blue sky
And I'll soar freely with the sparrows that sing merrily to the world
As they leave all complications behind

Sweet lullabies
Sooth me to sleep
Like rain in the Spring
And I'll close my eyes and drift off to the sound of the drops that splash outside
As I lie inside these confining walls and await my sweet dreams to reap

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caitlin Walczyk 11 January 2010

You are a good writer. Your descriptions are very nice. One suggestion, though. Poems fit in a nicer package when you make each line about the same amount of syllables and length. Keep writing!

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