Silentpoet Grl


Sweet Poison - Poem by Silentpoet Grl

sweet nectar upon lips
when placed so gently
a kiss, whispered love
cunning hiss unheard
stolen breath, gasping
charmed by the dance
blinded to the disguise
words alluring, hungry
desire longing for more
gazing into your eyes
lost in a pool of deceit
razor sharp claws hid
paint crimson carvings
caressing weak flesh
drinking sweet poison,
this venom laced love
seals the fate of death
a kiss carved painfully
writing hate upon wrists


Comments about Sweet Poison by Silentpoet Grl

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/19/2012 6:21:00 AM)

    Many, who take to the pen, especially young people, young girls... these days, have experienced this very thing! Your words draw out the emotions and pain that you (and them) go through every minute, of every hour, of every day... no end in sight. That's why writing helps, It brings these ugly truths to the surface of the skin- spelling the letters in blood... HELP ME...SAVE ME...LOVE ME. Isn't that what we learn in life? Sometime, the hard way.- Great Ink!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (8/17/2012 4:28:00 AM)

    Really Powerful words and expression! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (3/16/2012 10:26:00 PM)

    Speechless! Beauty and Love filtered through this powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you again for sharing another of your masterpieces with us! Keep it up! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shadow Girl (3/11/2012 12:38:00 AM)

    Fantastically beautiful
    -SG
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,216 Points Pheko Motaung (2/22/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    A masterly performance! Cheers to you! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,463 Points Donnie Wolff (2/19/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    its beautiful............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Crimson Soul (2/15/2012 9:24:00 PM)

    Very Incredible. You used words that would require the least amount of quantity, but to a maximum effect. Its pretty smart of you :) It also sets a specific mood that makes you feel almost as if you were that person. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,835 Points Ramesh Rai (2/14/2012 10:06:00 PM)

    i think poison is always sweet. great write and a nice poem to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fiona Eris Strand (2/14/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    Very descriptive and detailed. I would very much like to read more now. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (2/6/2012 11:01:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem my friend, great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points C. Cruz (2/6/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    Brautwurst all around for all! Powerful medicine SPGrl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Jinal Oswal (2/6/2012 6:05:00 AM)

    Wonderful write! I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,757 Points Elena Sandu (2/6/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,725 Points Dave Walker (2/6/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    A really powerful poem, great feeling in the words.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,757 Points Elena Sandu (2/6/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, February 6, 2012


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