Sweet Revenge … 2410-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Sweet Revenge … 2410-2k12

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Today I speak
a volume steeped in revenge
no more yearn
a burning desire to avenge

to far off lands
happily dressed and away
where to then?
to the towers that sway?

That iconic curio
Lets go and enjoy
Darkly I sniffle
At the fabulous ploy

hold your hand
in such a tender display
then in my heart
let demons gladly play

see in your eyes
a welling romantic dream
too sad, sigh!
soon a horrible scream

as you slide down
a shed pebble of Pisa
I atop scowl
watch with a smile of Lisa

Ah! So sweet
Is to even the score
down on the street
look at a completed chore


original
24 oct,2k12
Islamabad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 21 November 2012

wonderful poem ....... the topic is nice........... enjoyed

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Anita Sehgal 07 November 2012

very powerful.. imagery.. interesting write!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 October 2012

Ah another wonderful poem on a topic i hav written too but not yet submitted. Great usage of d tower of pisa n monalisa's smile eh. I dint see d link so i jus read dis one. Kudos.

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