Sweet Surrender Poem by Nikita Kumawat

Sweet Surrender

Rating: 4.8


With the break of dawn, I realized some magical moments are gone

Amidst the mixed feelings, seldom I smiled but also called myself moron



Occasionally we do meet such fascinating moments in life, just out of nowhere

We can't resist but just be submissive & cherish them as time of sweet surrender



Mountains take myriad prestige of being erect & bold in front of land & populace

but serene beauty of a river flowing across, can make them to serve in obedience



I shall practice not to get carried away when Its required most to act wise

But after having finished the priorities, all pleasures can make home in my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikita K 24 March 2012

Thank you, Dave. Hope to see you surfing into my poems, more often. Guess its time for The Blues And Me.

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Dave Walker 20 March 2012

A fantastic poem like it, a great write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, The Blues And Me.

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