Rouren Torres


Sweet Temptation - Poem by Rouren Torres

Kiss me,
I dare you.

Hold me,
I ask you.

Caress me,
I plead to you.

Touch me,
I beg of you.

Because I yearn.
Because I thirst.
Because I burn.

Because there is no eye,
It will stay between you and I.
Though God won't forgive you,
I will.
Because a sin is well shared,
If it is ours to bear.


Comments about Sweet Temptation by Rouren Torres

  • Gold Star - 7,853 Points Bri Edwards (7/27/2014 11:32:00 PM)

    I plea to you. ..... maybe i plead you or i beg you or my plea to you, but i don't think I plea to you.

    and..............tbere is no eye, ..........please take more time to proofread before submitting. i've liked both poems i've read, but it is distracting when i find typos etc. i like this poem so much, i shall send it to MyPoemList.

    It will stay between you and I.............i'm sure some others would write it this way, but i believe (since you and I comes after between) between you and I should be written between you and me. of course you could be using 'poetic license' to cheat a bit and get the eye/I? what do others think?

    i especially enjoyed the lines:

    Because tbere is no eye,
    It will stay between you and I.
    Though God won't forgive you,
    I will.
    Because a sin is well shared,
    If it is ours to bare..................................very nice! (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 14,027 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 7:03:00 PM)

    ........wonderful write....lovely poem and sweet title....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (1/20/2014 8:35:00 PM)

    sweet temptation, very good one, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 28, 2014


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