Andrew Barber

Rookie (16 August 1969 / Wisbech)

Swept - Poem by Andrew Barber

I am swept by visions of glory,
Given to flame and burnt to the soul.
Of touching bonds in raging fury,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was asked to produce a work with shades of tastefully erotic content, avoiding anything crude or harsh.

I used quatrain stanzas (verses of 4 lines) with an ABCB rhyming scheme (lines 2 and 4 of each verse rhyme) .

The poem takes it rhythm from the ocean (even the title) . There are numerous maritime references such as tides, ebb and curl. In addition, the poem uses senses – sight, touch, taste, smell and sensation.

Comments about Swept by Andrew Barber

  • Veteran Poet - 1,649 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/6/2013 7:27:00 AM)

    wow, you are good at it.
    It is as if I am reading a romantically erotic/erotically romantic novel
    Very nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/27/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    Excellent write. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it...Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,194 Points Valerie Dohren (7/27/2013 4:55:00 AM)

    Excellent write Andrew, you captured the mild eroticism very well. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (7/27/2013 3:26:00 AM)

    You certainly did what you was asked, very tastefully done,
    And a beautiful poem. Really great work. (Report) Reply








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