Take A Step Into You Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Take A Step Into You

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Oh life with your precious breath
you bring me bliss
oh and lets not forget
you find bliss in all there is
take a step back take a step down
take a step forward take a step up
you make it
see bliss stands for
because life is simple simple
yes, that is true
isn't it so
close your eyes for now
and picture your world
no one else just yours
smile, oh yes, I see it lifting your lips
illuminating your heart
ahh, I see your vision
your world has been created
with just one moment of thought
with one breath
now open your eyes
and see what agrees to enter
your world
don't despair
if nothing comes
it is your world after all
but you know much will feel it
and will come in their own time
to greet you, to be with you
to share it
do you think I am crazy
talking about something like this
of course many may say it is so
but why should we care
of what they think
when the whole world sits upon the heart
of just one breath you carry
go on paint the picture
sit with a candle in darkness
let it lead you with its light
yes, stare at the flame
like a child with open heart
and open mind to discover
all there is
it's your world after all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 20 September 2012

I agree with Thomas, this is stunning piece, i loved it..there is always a positive vibrant and colorful mind in your works...that is awesome thing to keep doing in every poem..keep it up and make more smiles bloom in this world_Unwritten Soul

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Sallam Yassin 11 September 2012

all the feeling of your heart make it painting make it poster in your mind so the whole is in your heart. thanks Kasia Fedyk for this blissful poem. AND GOD BLESS YOU.

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