Take Away Agony And Pain Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take Away Agony And Pain

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Drop by drop
Never stop
Be on top
Till I say nope

Yes, it is hunger
Words not spoken with anger
Mother earth
May long for it till last breath

Millions of lives to be fed
With tons of grains for use in bread
Where from it may come?
So I eagerly await and welcome

What an accomplishment!
With all that happy moments
Each drop is stored and conceived
Motherhood is felt and convinced

Each use has its difference
Nothing can grow in its absence
It is love that is given and taken
Faith is always there and not shaken

I shall stand head high
With deep regards and try
That o, rain you come again
To take away agony and pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Drop by drop Never stop

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

o, rain you come again To take away agony and pain beautiful write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

o, rain you come again To take away agony and pain. what a beautiful write Ramesh Rai5 minutes ago loved it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

it should be more like mothernature April Moore5 minutes ago mother nature is to be taken serious. Comment +1 *

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

it should be more like mothernature April Moore5 minutes ago mother nature is to be taken serious. Comment +1 * Josefin Östmark8 minutes ago Love the rhyming! You're an amazing writer. :) Comment +1 Great concept.. Miss on the language.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Jessie Miranda3 minutes ago The grasp on the language a fail, tho the concept was great, your use of words were innaffective, and a miss, the rhyme scheme was a subtle throb of in and out, and use of some words are useles

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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