Lillie Ellis

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Take My Hand - Poem by Lillie Ellis

Take my hand and I'll show you the way
Take my hand and I won't give you away
Just take my hand.
Promise that you'll love me for as long as
you can.
So just take my hand.
I'll just be happy with your hand.
I won't let you fall.
I won't let you drown
I won't let you be away from me
Take my hand and I'll show you away
Take my hand and I won't give you away
I need your hand to live
I need your love to live
I need you to live
take my hand gently
We don't have to rush
We have all our lives to be together
I don't want to waste one second of it
Take my hand and I'll show you the way
Take my hand and I won't give you away
Just take my hand


Comments about Take My Hand by Lillie Ellis

  • Rookie Jasmine Dugas (7/13/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    your poem is real good and amazing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Callie Rank (6/25/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    I like this poem! ! Very good! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Crystal Midnight~ (6/9/2009 8:34:00 PM)

    good job here... it made me think... I really like this...easy to read and something that your reader can relate too... well done... this is by far your best.
    ~CM~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Dreamer (5/17/2009 6:01:00 PM)

    Very Creative lillie continue to 'take your hand' and thoughts to paper
    Very Nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zachary Clark (5/8/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    Draws you in and shows you your feelings I loved it thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 17, 2009



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