Bre Renee

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Take some more


its fake. all spinning around.

for gods sake, dont be so loud.

pounding, bleeding,

swollen shut.

im not leaving

to see what?

killing me,

peace by peace

taring it for me to see

laughing, crying,

bleeding, spying,

take some more

youll be alright

takeing more

you wont feel the fight

numbing bodys

numbing minds

laying there

till someone finds

dont be scared

its been done before

dont be scared...

just take some more.

Submitted: Tuesday, January 11, 2011
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