Taken Poem by lindsey ashton

Taken

Rating: 5.0


She stays in the shadow of her keepers watchful eyes,
Her breath becomes shallow as her spirit dies,
Her keeper silences her her screams and cries,
Her empty voice whispers her sorrowful goodbyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 03 December 2008

Powerful piece Lindsey,10/10 regards Tom

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Sam Byron 12 November 2008

it's full of emotion and to the point... i really like it

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May Namoc 06 November 2008

aww. its so sad and short, so full of emotion. great write lindsey. May

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<font color =fusha>Amy 06 November 2008

short, simple, sad such an emotional poem Loved it =D

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C T Heart 06 November 2008

i felt sadness here in your piece, short but with full of emotions dwelling...great write...a 10.

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lindsey ashton

lindsey ashton

wigan, manchester UK
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