Taking Rest Again Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Taking Rest Again

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A day has passed with birth
A day has passed with death
In middle, days are passed
In work we have seen love.

Feeling so tired we take rest
But restlessness is in work
We again develop and work hard
To sustain in life once more.

So many duties remain for next
Days remain and days dwell sure
With spreading of light we see
Nice style is adopted in mind.

Taking rest is our process far
This is universally designed
Cosmic law is set likewise
God has given chance for new.

Saturday, January 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 09 January 2016

Phew! nobody can escape from the grills of life, monotonous life freezes our minds and heart and we just become robots in the hands of time. Love the way the poem is ended on a positive note. Compliments.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 November 2018

This is a great prayer-poem of evening, manifesting gratitude.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2016

We need Rest In life. Nice work.

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Edmund Strolis 09 January 2016

Refreshing, the free will of the seeker can consciously begin anew.COSMIC LAW IS SET LIKEWISE. The rest, the cycle....new eyes to see through old tired prejudices and our human weakness. WITH SPREADING OF LIGHT WE SEE.

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Kelly Kurt 09 January 2016

After a day of physical and mental activity, rest is appreciated

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Wonderful poem, So many duties remain for next Days remain and days dwell sure With spreading of light we see Nice style is adopted in mind.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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