Talaash! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Lajawab, Bemisal Mohabbat ki dastan hai ye.....................Azmaish jitni kadi ho, anjaam utna hi asardaar hota hai..Beshak ye Mohabbat rang layegi, parwaan chad jaegi....Wo zarur ayega jiska aapko intezaar hai, Haqqeqat mein ba-hosh o hawaas aur kya manzar hoga us milan ka....Thought provoking poetry...Awesome..falling short of adjectives...100+++

Intzaar maana lambaa bahut tha Magar pyar beintehaan tha Waqt badlta raha mausam badlte rahe Magar laaut kar wo aaya Kyunki pyar main sach bahut tha taab bahut tha Beautiful poem....loved it...thanks for sharing :)

Really a thought provoking poem....appreciate the way you have presented the theme. You are writing so well but I can't see the reason of your silence. Hope you will come back soon!

Hi Arzoo, My Urdu is limited. But this sher I liked very much. Maang loongi mein usko duniya se hatke khuda se mein. That is the ultimate demand of love. And Kaise aazad ho gayee mein, duniyaa ke rasmon aur riwazon se- the true depiction of a person in love! very deep observation and aesthetic poetic representation. Loved reading.

Talaashti ho kissi apne. Peace is the key! And hope lies ahead. Nice piece of work.

[...]Meri turbat usko dikhlana Aur kehna ke Intezaar main tere, ho gayi Supurd e khaaq kabki Usse kehna ki mit gayi thi main Nibaate nibhaate faraiz.e duniya Usse kehna ke dekh le ab wo Kaise azaad ho gayi hun main Saari rasmon aur riwaajon se[...] Arzoo, har roj mai kam se kam 50-60 kavitayein parta hu,4 bhashaon mein, lekin bohoot kam aise nazm hote hai jo ankhoon se sach me ansoon, aur dil me ek dard ka ehsaas kara jai.. Ye nazm parte huye sach mein dil me iss mein bayaan kiyi gayi ladki ke liye dua aa gayi.. Nastik hu main, magar fir bhi agar koi bhi Khuda kahi par bhi hota, to iss ladki ke liye mein dua karta.. I don't really, ever, get this emotional reading a poem.. This goes to my favourites.. I wish I had discovered your poems before.. Thank you very much..

एक ज़बरदस्त नज़्म हमसे शेयर करने के लिये आपका बेहद शुक्रिया, आरज़ू महक साहिबा. इस बारे में कुछ कहना चाहूँगा. किसी शख्स को बड़ी जद्दोजहद, तलाश और इंतज़ार के बाद मंज़िल मिल जाये, तो उसे खुशनसीब माना जाना चाहिये. मगर अफ़सोस, जब सफ़र यही ख़त्म होता दिखाई न दे तो ऐसे हालात में मुँह से बेसाख्ता निकल जाता है कि 'मर के भी चैन न पाया तो किधर जायेंगे? ' नज़्म की कुछ खास पंक्तियाँ: Usko mere pass tum lana / Meri turbat usko dikhlana / Usse kehna ki mit gayi thi main / Nibaate nibhaate faraiz.e duniya / Aur sath hi saath ye bhi keh dena / Ke maang lungi mein / Usko duniya se hat ke, Khuda se main