Tan Lay Min Poem by Tan Wei Fu

Tan Lay Min



The prophecy of us being together,
All this while as I truly believe,
Now, has gone.

Life without you is an absolute rollercoaster,
Along the journey, I walk in loneliness,
Yearning for your Love and Affection.

Mystery remains and unsolved puzzle, yet,
I, still remain the same,
Nurturing my Everlasting love for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Tan 03 February 2007

Right. Is this like some sort of love poem for your beloved to tell her you're pining for her? You could have at least named it smth else... So blatent. So jia you on your love life. I think your writing skills are not bad, so hope you post something more poemy... Happy living.

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