Tanka - 12 Life's Journey Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - 12 Life's Journey

Rating: 5.0


how gently the ship
sinks and takes its place deep down —
the base to settle
when death gives the final call
my name, written on the wall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2016

Deep down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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T Rajan Evol 25 July 2016

Deep philosophical tanka, on a serious note.

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Kelly Kurt 25 July 2016

A very moving piece, Mohammed

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Nosheen Irfan 25 July 2016

Superb. So beautifully expressed. Wise thoughts. Very insightful write. Full marks to you.

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