Tanka [from A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka] 2 Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

Tanka [from A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka] 2



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I stay behind her
while walking down the slope
like a soldier;
yet, no sword but an image
to turn into a poem




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[in my book 'A Season for Everyone - Haiku & Tanka Poetry']

Tanka [from A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka] 2
Friday, October 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,soldier
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this tanka is in my book 'A Season for Everyone - Haiku & Tanka Poetry'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Minnie Froh 15 November 2017

i would give a full 10 also to this tanka. why you don't want us to vote?

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

problem, with the ''rating'', is that there are people who simple like to 'joke' with the function... they are a minority, I know, but they are not so few... unfortunately

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Beautiful.. An inspiration to write a poem Fab Rini

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 October 2017

thank you, dear Rini. BTW, not a poem from you, for in the Anthology ' HOMO HOMINI LUPUS - Why To kill a Mockingbird? ' ?

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Fabio Doria 19 November 2017

the poem is really cool.As Minnie Froh said, why can't we vote?

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Any fresh information about the health of Dr Fabrizio?

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It is reported that Dr Fabrizio is not keeping good health of late. May he get well soon

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Love this poem. Enjoyed the revisit. It is reported that Dr Fsbris

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This beautiful tanka is ranked 81 among the members poems today. Congratulations

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2020

Up-down everywhere Savior- after earthly life Confident walks forth Sky the independent field Birds can fly there openly

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